So, you have made a case for your views and demolished your opponents’ claims. The journey doesn’t end here. An editorial is primarily meant to indulge in constructive criticism . even though it critiques one point of view, it must be able to provide a possible alternative. Say, your editorial attacked the efficacy of steps taken by the government to curb domestic violence in a particular region, conclude your piece by discussing other viable options. Once again, build an argument and talk about why these proposed steps are better than the ones already in place. Don’t mistake an editorial for an opportunity to indulge in mindless criticism; instead, use it to offer a better vision for the future.
Many find writing an editorial tough because you need to have excellent writing skills that are able to capture the readers' attention and help them clearly identify the points you are trying to raise in the editorial. Because the editorial is based on an opinion, it should be well-presented and have a continuous flow of writing. It is important to keep the flow of writing continuous because this will keep your writing well-organized and in a structured manner. Some writers are not able to present their writing in an articulate manner because they don’t know how to shape their opinions in the right way which leads to a very muddled editorial essay.
A common sight today would be younger children playing mature video games. This is a sad thing, because kids at this age shouldn’t be playing these games. I believe that stores should refrain from selling mature games to minors, for this would lead to mental immaturity is some more mature topics. The stores should still sell them to minors if the parents are absolutely okay with them playing the game, and if the game contains anything like nudity or sex then the game should not be rated mature but should be rated explicit or adult.
The main reason that stores should not be allowed to sell mature games to minors is if a nine year old child would be exposed to mature content earlier in their lives (this is also why they should put nudity into an explicit rating) so they may not be able to mentally mature on some of those topics or not be that scared of going to jail.
The child may also get addicted to drugs because if their favorite video game character smokes then it cannot possibly hurt him in real life anyway, but a common misconception is that you may think that these games will also lead to violent behavior in children because they think their friends will just respawn, but that would only happen if say a two year old played the games. Because at least a nine year old should have the common knowledge to know that death is permanent. That argument is completely absurd that kids will kill people thinking they will come back just think about it if they did drugs that would be one thing, but playing games a lot no if you were to get obsessed with a game do you think that it would change your look on reality?
No it wouldn’t, but mature games still have bad influences to kids, so until they are at least fifteen they shouldn’t be allowed to play mature games. Because of the current age limit for mature games at seventeen, a lot more kids at younger ages play these mature games, and these games contain more mature content like functions where you can have kids in games and get STD’s. I know that from personal experience that some people make a goal of getting the most STD’s which can cause immaturity in kids in their early teens. This might cause kids to think that it is just something that won’t affect them later in their lives other themes like this would be drinking and other drug problems that might affect them, but this does not affect every kid that plays games that doesn’t mean it wont happen to your child.